Showing posts with label Stories. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Stories. Show all posts

Riding a Bike


 I am scared and afraid at the same time because I am going to ride my bike. But   my mum is going to help me. First my mum gave me some instructions. Second I put on my helmet, I hopped on to my bike then my mum said to pedal faster. So I started pedaling faster but I didn't  pedal fast enough because my legs are turning into jelly. My bike is wobbling because my arms are not strong enough, not focusing and my body is shaking. But, my mum is running with me. Her job is to make sure I keep on pedaling. While I kept on pedaling I saw that I was riding straight to the park. I entered the park and went on the footpath.  I can hear the concrete under the wheels of my bike and my mum is right behind me. I felt like I was alone riding to the park. While I was pedaling I started to wobble.  I tried to stop wobbling but I couldn't help it. I was about to go to the field when I fell off. Luckily for me I pulled the handlebars to the middle. Finally I stopped my bike. My mum was impressed I felt a little bad. My mum told me that it was over and I was pleased that it was over riding a bike is scary.


 By Samson  

Lost


PART 1

I am looking for my mum.  People are talking and laughing.  I am scared, but I have to be brave. I stand and look, but I can’t see her. So I start to walk. I shout, “ mum mum!!”There is  no reply so I go to a women and say in a small voice, “hi I have lost my mum. Can you please help me find her?”
 She said, “yes where do you think she is?”
I said, “I don’t know.”  So we went to the front of the shop and I got some help.
They asked me, “what's your phone number?”
 I reply but when they call it came to the answers phone.  So we wait, and wait, but we can’t see my mum.  So we call on the speaker but still no answer I’m scared. I’m terrifiedMum where are you?

To be continued…


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